Thursday, September 16, 2010

Penitence

I repented today

With a silent act of minor motions,

Mundane to any onlooker--

But internally I was prostrate,

Agreeing with God

That I am covetous,

Indignant that others thrive

Where I have dwindled.



Despising the person

That Envy twists me into,

I joined the celebration of another,

Repenting as I will again and again

Because Jealousy is a wily grappler

Who trips and pins, gorging on Pride

Of which I have a glutton's larder*.











*larder=pantry

2 comments:

april said...

How does one comment on a poem where the author is repenting? But I do like how you set up the poem to say your sorry for being jealous of all you don't have, when in the end, what you do have a a glutten's larder. I know this all too well...

Jeff and Aimee said...

Thanks for commenting, April. It's funny 'cause my intention was to say that I have to keep on repenting because Envy is fed by Pride and I've got a whole lot of that (the glutton's larder), but your interpretation (it's ridiculous to be jealous of others when you've already been given so much)is so true, too.